I would like to go to Tanzania.
I am interested in the Tanzania’s national park.
At national park there is sapary (not a zoo).
There are wild animals. For example lions, rhino and elephant.
At sapary, If you are lucky you can see lots of cow and lions are hunting.
I want to see the lions are hunting. Because I think that was special.
I want to go to Tanzania.
I am interested in the Tanzania’s national park.
At national park there is sapary (not a zoo).
There are wild animals. For example lions, rhino and elephant.
At sapary, If you are lucky you can see lots of cow and lions are hunting.
I want to see the lions are hunting. Because I think that was special.
I want to go to Tanzania.
I would like to go to Tanzania.
I am interested in Tanzania’s national parks.
There are safaris in the national parks, not zoos.
You can see wild animals like lions, rhinos, and elephants.
On a safari, if you’re lucky, you might see buffalos and even lions hunting.
I want to see lions hunting because I think it’s something special.
That’s why I want to visit Tanzania.
EXPLANATION:
1. ❌: I am interested in the Tanzania’s national park.
✅: I am interested in Tanzania’s national parks.
Why?
- We don’t need “the” with “Tanzania’s.”
- Also, there is more than one park, so we say “parks.”
2. ❌: At national park there is sapary (not a zoo).
✅: There are safaris in the national parks, not zoos.
Why?
- We say “there are” when we talk about more than one thing.
- “Sapary” is wrong spelling — the correct word is “safari.”
- Also, “safari” happens in a park, not “at” it.
3. ❌: There are wild animals. For example lions, rhino and elephant.
✅: You can see wild animals like lions, rhinos, and elephants.
Why?
- "Rhino" and "elephant" should be plural → "rhinos" and "elephants".
- "Like" is easier than "for example" when giving examples.
4. ❌: At sapary, If you are lucky you can see lots of cow and lions are hunting.
✅: On a safari, if you’re lucky, you might see buffalos and even lions hunting.
Why?
- We say “on a safari”, not “at.”
- The correct spelling is “safari,” not “sapary.”
- We say “buffalos”, not “cow” (cows live on farms, not in the wild).
- We say “lions hunting,” not “lions are hunting” in this kind of sentence.
- We use “might” to talk about something possible.
5. ❌: I want to see the lions are hunting. Because I think that was special.
✅: I want to see lions hunting because I think it’s something special.
Why?
- We don’t need “the” or “are.”
- We say “is”, not “was,” because it’s about the future.
6. ❌: I want to go to Tanzania.
✅: That’s why I want to visit Tanzania.
Why?
- We use “That’s why” to show the reason.
- “Visit” is a better word when we talk about travel.
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