And I played to my many friends played and ate we ate the food. And we played bouncy bouncy.
and 4d rollrercoster. lt's scare. Because we seen the mounster, gost rollrercoster. lt's scare.
and we walk and all ! . in sicne class we wathe the fun cutte movie. called poon yoou. in korl an.
lt's fish and mouther and little boy gay. lt's catte. today and right now I'm very exsiting!!!
today is exsiting day. today our school had the danso class for 40 minute. it was very confusing.
And I played to my many friends played and ate we ate the food. And we played bouncy bouncy.
and 4d rollrercoster. lt's scare. Because we seen the mounster, gost rollrercoster. lt's scare.
and we walk and all ! . in sicne class we wathe the fun cutte movie. called poon yoou. in korl an.
lt's fish and mouther and little boy gay. lt's catte. today and right now I'm very exsiting!!!
Correction:
Today is an exciting day. Our school had the danco class for 40 minutes. It was very confusing.
I played with many friends and ate food. We played bouncy bouncy
and 4d rollrercoster. lt's scary because we saw monsters, ghosts while riding the rollercoaster. lt's frightening.
We walked a lot. In science class, we watched and fun and cute movie called poon you.
lt's fish and mother and little boy. Today and right now ,I'm very excited!!!
Hi, Bomin. This is teacher Joel. Remember, when you are writing a sentence, start with a capital letter and end with a period, question mark or an exclamation mark.
