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*합격해야 하는 이유 3가지
-First, I actively can be adapted quickly to the environment than other people because I have experience with the internship in various fields such as business strategy, accounting, Secretary, management support. Secondly, I think I’m creative better than other people. while I was in College, I was awarded as the Grand and Encouragement Prize in the start-up competition and I like to think in a variety of fields and I have a custom that Once i thought good idea, I write on the mobile phone or notebook. On the basis of these creativity, I want to become an employee to create high added value. Finally, I have strong responsibility and exact personality. when I was in middle and high school, because I has been a class president, I have strong responsibility and I was awarded the prize for perfect attendance that is not the absence and being late. Also, I've heard that managers said a lot of praise to me that I have a careful and exact when I did internship. Therefore, if Spigen company viewed in the emphasis on honesty and clam, I think you must be pass me.

*합격해야 하는 이유 3가지
-First, I actively can be adapted quickly to the environment than other people because I have experience with the internship in various fields such as business strategy, accounting, Secretary, management support. Secondly, I think I’m creative better than other people. while I was in College, I was awarded as the Grand and Encouragement Prize in the start-up competition and I like to think in a variety of fields and I have a custom that Once i thought good idea, I write on the mobile phone or notebook. On the basis of these creativity, I want to become an employee to create high added value. Finally, I have strong responsibility and exact personality. when I was in middle and high school, because I has been a class president, I have strong responsibility and I was awarded the prize for perfect attendance that is not the absence and being late. Also, I've heard that managers said a lot of praise to me that I have a careful and exact when I did internship. Therefore, if Spigen company viewed in the emphasis on honesty and clam, I think you must be pass me.

 

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First, I could actively quickly adapt to the environment than the other people. Because, I had an experience with the internship in various fields such as business strategy, accounting, secretary, management support. Second, I think I am creative than the other people. While I was in College, I was awarded as the Grand and Encouragement Prize in the startup competition and I think in and I like to be part of variety of fields that I am going to have a custom that once I thought was a good idea. I usually write on my mobile phone or notebook. On the basis of this creativity, I want to become an employee to create high added value. Finally, I have strong responsibility and exact personality. When I was in the middle and high school I was a school president.  I have a strong responsibility and I was awarded the prize for having the perfect attendance with no absences nor late. Also  I’ve heard that  the  managers said a lot of praise  about me, that I am careful and I do exact things when I was in my internship. Therefore; if Spigen Company will view in the emphasis on the Honesty and Claim. I think they will pass me.


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