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1.I have a mobile phone case that I’m currently using, is a super hybrid case of Spigen company. Actually I Until use in my case, there was no big interest in a company called Spigen. The chance to trigger, but my in changing the mobile phone iPhone, iPhone to it now that i worry most that should be specified what company of cases by leaving a failure and too drop. Among such, it has been supposed to know the spigen case, I bought a spigen case to see a lot basis of iPhone users that it is a simple and very sturdy.

2.actually I live with my grandmother. Therefore it was decided to suffer it should be explained how to our grandma to hear this question. Our grandma watch at the time of very a lot of TV everyday, therefore I thought it was probably the best that able to transmit information along with the visual elements, such as the TV. So, in this way, if I describe to the grandma by creating a virtual mobile phone, “you took this as photograph on a mobile phone to discover the bygone shader this beautiful flower, if you want this flower show it to someone else, you will register on the Internet called social networks like Facebook and Twitter. With this way to register the photos, a lot of people look at the pictures mentioned grandma, such as ‘a flower is very beautiful.’ or ‘What is the name of this flower?’ and if you answer such a comment here, you will be able to communicate and interact with many people in real time. I say it’s a social network."

1.I have a mobile phone case that I’m currently using, is a super hybrid case of Spigen company. Actually I Until use in my case, there was no big interest in a company called Spigen. The chance to trigger, but my in changing the mobile phone iPhone, iPhone to it now that i worry most that should be specified what company of cases by leaving a failure and too drop. Among such, it has been supposed to know the spigen case, I bought a spigen case to see a lot basis of iPhone users that it is a simple and very sturdy.

2.actually I live with my grandmother. Therefore it was decided to suffer it should be explained how to our grandma to hear this question. Our grandma watch at the time of very a lot of TV everyday, therefore I thought it was probably the best that able to transmit information along with the visual elements, such as the TV. So, in this way, if I describe to the grandma by creating a virtual mobile phone, “you took this as photograph on a mobile phone to discover the bygone shader this beautiful flower, if you want this flower show it to someone else, you will register on the Internet called social networks like Facebook and Twitter. With this way to register the photos, a lot of people look at the pictures mentioned grandma, such as ‘a flower is very beautiful.’ or ‘What is the name of this flower?’ and if you answer such a comment here, you will be able to communicate and interact with many people in real time. I say it’s a social network."

 

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1.     I have a mobile phone case that I am currently using; it is a super hybrid case of Spigen Company. Actually I never use a case. I don’t have any interest in a company named Spigen. The chance triggers me. But when I change my mobile phone into iPhone, I am currently using iPhone now so I am worried because the company is being specific about what cases you will use. I t suppose to be Spigen Case s I bought Spigen case to see a lot of basis of iPhone users that it is simple and sturdy.

        

2. Actually I lived with my grandmother. Therefore: I decided to explain these things about my grandma for her to hear my explanation. My grandma is always watching TV. everyday, Therefore: I thought it  was probably the best to transmit information together with the virtual designs such as T.V. So in this way if I will discuss this to grandma by using the mobile phone, she can take photos, and you can edit the background with the beautiful flowers, If you want this flower to send to someone you need to register in the internet like facebook,Twitter. In this way you can upload the photos and a lot of people can see the pictures as I said to grandma. They can also comment about the pictures like, what is the name of the flower? And also you can communicate with them at the same time. That’s  how social networking sites.


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