Busy

I also want to feel like being a busy person. Business may mean that I work hard and succeessfully. That kinds of effect comes from excessive competition in the society.people wnat to be succeess and they sometimes look up the person whose dream came true and write what he or she worked to be a successman and never forget how busy he/she lived.
People who are eager to be a success man tend to follow "the life style".

 

I also want to feel like being a busy person. Busyness may mean that I work hard and successfully. That kind of effect comes from excessive competition in the society. People want to be successful and they sometimes look up at the person whose dream came true and write what he or she worked to be successful and never forget how busy he/she lived.
People who are eager to be successful tend to follow  that “life style".

 

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Monica,

 

 

Success and successful are different in use. Success is a noun. It means “the correct or desired result of an attempt”. Successful is an adjective. Adjective describes. Therefore, you should use “successful” in your essay. You may also say “a successful person or man”.