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3.If you let the failed me Spigen company, first reason is my lack of English ability. I especially is not enough listening than reading and writing. Therefore, currently I has a morning video English, and so i know better than anyone to the deficient portion and I will study continuously in order to overcome this. The second reason is that I have so majored in business administration, so I hasn’t enough IT and mobile expertise than Engineering students. The third reason, I usually take too much time before making any decision. but, once I make the decision, I don’t look back and get on with the work. If I a fail, clearly because i lack of which part or my competitiveness low, I will try to complement such part.

4.When i first saw the spigen web site, it is overall very simple and categories are made systematically as Spigen design philosophy, so it was looked by smart. However, the point I was a little regrettable, web site has model image of the mobile phone under the main Web site, and therefore whether, I first fell such mobile phone sell company rather than mobile accessories company. However, clicking the model of the mobile phone, it was very good since it was possible to see the accessories associated with the model at once.

3.If you let the failed me Spigen company, first reason is my lack of English ability. I especially is not enough listening than reading and writing. Therefore, currently I has a morning video English, and so i know better than anyone to the deficient portion and I will study continuously in order to overcome this. The second reason is that I have so majored in business administration, so I hasn’t enough IT and mobile expertise than Engineering students. The third reason, I usually take too much time before making any decision. but, once I make the decision, I don’t look back and get on with the work. If I a fail, clearly because i lack of which part or my competitiveness low, I will try to complement such part.

4.When i first saw the spigen web site, it is overall very simple and categories are made systematically as Spigen design philosophy, so it was looked by smart. However, the point I was a little regrettable, web site has model image of the mobile phone under the main Web site, and therefore whether, I first fell such mobile phone sell company rather than mobile accessories company. However, clicking the model of the mobile phone, it was very good since it was possible to see the accessories associated with the model at once.

 

 

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3. If I failed with the Spigen Company, The reason will be because I am not that good in English. Listening and reading and writing are not enough. Currently I have a morning video English class, so I know better than anyone to deficient portion and I will continuously study in order to overcome this. The second reason is that I am majored in Business Administration, so I don’t have enough knowledge about IT and Mobile devices than engineering students. The third reason, I usually take too much time before making any decision. But once I made a decision, I don’t look back and get work on it. If I fail, clearly because my competitive were low and I will complement of being such a part.

4. When I first saw the Spigen at the Website, Over all it was very simple and categories are made systematically as Spigens designs philosophy, so it was looked by smart. The point is it’s regrettable, the website change the image of the mobile phone under the main website. At first I thought the company sells mobile phones not accessories. However, by clicking the model of the phone,It was good because  it is possible to see the accessories associated with the model at once.


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