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male character II

CAST : Nam ha jin

Nam ha jin is 32 years old.

He has appearance like prince, warm , gentle and rational character that wouldn't get emotionally caught up.

He is being gentle in apperance, but sturdy in spirit.

When he dates, he doesn't phaze his date with push and pull.
He is reliable man who gives belief to his opponent.

This way of dating, he keeps dating with Han yu rum during 2 years.

He doesn't pretend to know even though she try to tame him doing something sly.
He knows the more he hunmor her, the more she shows adorble smile.

One day, He runs into Ah-Rum. Ah- Rum is his close sister when he was in an orphanage in childhood.
By the way, He was adopted from adoptive parents. So, they separated after his adoption.
After about 20 years, he meets Ah-rum by chance.
but he couldn't tell this story to his girl friend. Because his adoptive parents dislike to tell about
adpotion. so he has secret.

His girlfriend, Han yu rum sometimes misunderstands thier relationship.

what will happen to them in the future?

CAST : Nam ha jin

Nam ha jin is 32 years old.

He has appearance like a prince. Warm , gentle and rational character that wouldn't get emotionally caught up.

He is being gentle in appearance, but sturdy in spirit.

When he dates, he doesn't faze his date with push and pull.
He is a reliable man who gives belief to his opponent.

He keeps this way of dating with Han yu rum during 2 years.

He doesn't pretend to know even though she try to tame him doing something sly.

(Can you please explain this idea more?)
He knows the more he makes her laugh, the more she will show her adorable smile.

One day, He runs into Ah-Rum. Ah- Rum is his close sister when he was in an orphanage in childhood.
By the way, He was adopted. So, they separated after his adoption. 
After about 20 years, he meets Ah-rum by chance but he couldn't tell this story to his girl friend because his adoptive parents doesn’t want to bring the adoption topic. So, he has a secret.

His girlfriend, Han yu rum sometimes misunderstands their relationship.

what will happen to them in the future?

 

 

 

NOTE:

Clair, you are doing better and better. I’m so happy that you are improving and you follow the tips and reminders that I’m telling you. Thank you and have a great day. ^_^


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