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Pls review and correct the receiving procedure.

Hello Jen,

Good evening.. ^^ Are you enjoying this weekend? Maybe you are sleeping now.. because it's 1 am now...

After work today.. I preapared the presentation and Q&A for the audit. So pls review this and let me know if you want to correct and give me some tips for the presentaion. (Q&A is uploaded on Wedensday because of the letter limit.^^;;)

I am really thank you for your kindness and patient and everything.
I want to say this. "You are one of the greatest teachers I've met for 36years." ^^

Good night Jen.. bye.. ^^

Best regards,
ANSH


* RECEIVING PROCEDURE

Good afternoon, I'm glad to meet you. My name is MH Lee and I'm in charge of receiving department.
Let me introduce receiving procedure..
Here is receiving area and incoming inspection area as well.
Once goods are deliveried from suppliers and customers, receiving staff usually examine all incoming shipment.
At that time, they check house BL#, box quantity, outer box label and visual exterior damage with delivery manifest sheet from the truck driver. 
After inspecting the shipment and found with damage, our staff take pictures and notify IQA and Import Department immediately thru email
After matching up the data with invoice and packing list, receiving clerk enter shipment data into the SAP system
And then they issue general tags individually per each package or pallet.
The general tag contains complete information like Amkor batch#, material#, PO#, Qty etc.
After that they will inform IQA for the quality inspection thru SAP transactions
That's all about receiving procedure.

Hello Jen

Good evening. ^^ Are you enjoying this weekend? Maybe you are sleeping now because it's 1 am now.

After work today, I prepared the presentation and Q&A for the audit. So please review this and let me know if you want to correct and give me some tips for the presentation. (Q&A will be uploaded on Wednesday because of the letter limit.^^;;)


I am really thankful for your kindness and patience and everything.   (NOTE: Patient is an adjective. Example: She is patient to her students. So, you describe the girl. PATIENCE is noun. In your sentence, you used pronoun “your”. After that should be noun. Example: your phone, your kindness, you personality, your house. )

I want to say this. "You are one of the greatest teachers I've met for 36years." ^^ (NOTE: Thank you very much for this compliment. ^_^ You are kind and patient also in learning English.)

Good night Jen. Bye. ^^ 

Best regards
ANSH


* RECEIVING PROCEDURE

Good afternoon, I'm glad to meet you. My name is MH Lee and I'm in charge of receiving department.
Let me introduce receiving procedure.
Here is receiving area and incoming inspection area as well.
Once goods are delivered from suppliers and customers, receiving staff usually examine all incoming shipment.
At that time, they check house BL#, box quantity, outer box label and visual exterior damage with delivery manifest sheet from the truck driver. 
After inspecting the shipment and found with damage, our staff take pictures and notify IQA and Import Department immediately thru email.
After matching up the data with invoice and packing list, receiving clerk enters shipment data into the SAP system.
And then, they issue general tags individually per each package or pallet.
The general tag contains complete information like Amkor batch#, material#, PO#, Qty etc.
After that, they will inform IQA for the quality inspection thru SAP transactions.
And that’s all about receiving procedure.

(Note: Wow!!! Your sentences are really great. You made long and correct sentences. We just really need to improve your speaking skills. Have a great evening, sir Ansh. ^_^)


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