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I used to write Englsih diary in Australia to improve my English. And at that time i felt that helped me. So i will write English diary as much as i can.
Yesterday was last day of holiday. Korea has lunar new year holidays. it is at least 3days. Many people go to hometown to visit their parents. And they have a good time with family.
So my boyfriend and me, we were supposed to meet his family. We met in advanced to choice present for his mom. We bought presnt. It was sort of healty food. And then we had to wait his younger brother. He didnt finsh his work. While we were waiting his brother we had a fight. The problem was not a big thing. But he didnt control his mind , he yelled at me . I was really frightend. I have never seen that before.
When we met his family we had to pretend to be good. We pass throgh yesterday. but i still couldn't forget the scene that he yelled at me
Fortunatly now he is recognizing he was wrong. My eyes puffy because of crying. I hope we will get well.


Is it too short?_?

I used to write Englsih diary in Australia to improve my English. And at that time i felt that helped me. So i will write English diary as much as i can.
Yesterday was last day of holiday. Korea has lunar new year holidays. it is at least 3days. Many people go to hometown to visit their parents. And they have a good time with family.
So my boyfriend and me, we were supposed to meet his family. We met in advanced to choice present for his mom. We bought presnt. It was sort of healty food. And then we had to wait his younger brother. He didnt finsh his work. While we were waiting his brother we had a fight. The problem was not a big thing. But he didnt control his mind , he yelled at me . I was really frightend. I have never seen that before.
When we met his family we had to pretend to be good. We pass throgh yesterday. but i still couldn't forget the scene that he yelled at me
Fortunatly now he is recognizing he was wrong. My eyes puffy because of crying. I hope we will get well.


Is it too short?_?

CORRECTION:

I used to write an English diary in Australia to improve my English. And, at that time I felt that it helped me. So, I will write an English diary as much as I can. 
Yesterday was the last day of holiday. Korea has lunar new year holidays. It is at least 3days. Many people go to their hometown to visit their parents. And, they have a good time with their family. 
So my boyfriend and I, we were supposed to meet his family. We met in advanced to choose a present for his mom. We bought a present. It was sort of healthy food. And then we had to wait his younger brother. He didnt finsh his work. While we were waiting for his brother we had a fight. The problem was not a big thing. But, he didnt control his mind, he yelled at me . I was really frightend. I have never seen that before.
When we met his family we had to pretend to be good. We passed through yesterday, but I still couldn't forget the scene that he yelled at me.
Fortunately, now he is admitting that he was wrong. My eyes were puffy because I cried so much. I hope we will get well.


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