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Sometimes each day between in a school anniversary and weekend or korea event , it has a long holiday by principals opinion. It is a time now. We ready planed a trip plan for last week of months. so it was not somethings . Wolmi park is amusement that located near in inchen. When someone come to inchen trip it's one of attractions. We can see sea and take a criuse, .And there are street stage of some shows. As I am inches citizen I used to recommend there to friends. My son and I went to there .

Sometimes each day between in a school anniversary and weekend or korea event , it has a long holiday by principals opinion. It is a time now. We ready planed a trip plan for last week of months. so it was not somethings . Wolmi park is amusement that located near in inchen. When someone come to inchen trip it's one of attractions. We can see sea and take a criuse, .And there are street stage of some shows. As I am inches citizen I used to recommend there to friends. My son and I went to there .
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Here are the corrections:

  1. Original: Sometimes each day between in a school anniversary and weekend or korea event , it has a long holiday by principals opinion.
    Corrected: Sometimes, when a school anniversary falls near a weekend or a national holiday in Korea, schools have a long break based on the principal’s decision.
    Explanation:

    • "each day between in" is awkward and ungrammatical. Rephrased for clarity.

    • "korea" → capitalized to "Korea."

    • "it has a long holiday" → unclear subject. Clarified with "schools have a long break."

    • "by principals opinion" → corrected to "based on the principal’s decision" (grammar and phrasing).

  2. Original: It is a time now.
    Corrected: That time is now.
    Explanation: More natural phrasing in English.

  3. Original: We ready planed a trip plan for last week of months.
    Corrected: We already planned a trip for the last week of the month.
    Explanation:

    • "ready planed" → corrected to "already planned."

    • "trip plan" → redundant; simplified to "a trip."

    • "last week of months" → corrected to "last week of the month."

  4. Original: so it was not somethings.
    Corrected: So it wasn’t a big deal.
    Explanation: "not somethings" is unclear; rephrased to a natural expression.

  5. Original: Wolmi park is amusement that located near in inchen.
    Corrected: Wolmi Park is an amusement park located near Incheon.
    Explanation:

    • "is amusement" → incomplete; changed to "is an amusement park."

    • "near in inchen" → corrected to "near Incheon."

  6. Original: When someone come to inchen trip it's one of attractions.
    Corrected: When someone comes to Incheon, it’s one of the main attractions.
    Explanation:

    • "come to inchen trip" → rephrased to "comes to Incheon."

    • "it's one of attractions" → corrected to "one of the main attractions" for natural flow.

  7. Original: We can see sea and take a criuse, .And there are street stage of some shows.
    Corrected: You can see the sea, take a cruise, and enjoy street performances.
    Explanation:

    • "see sea" → added "the" for clarity.

    • "criuse" → spelling corrected to "cruise."

    • "street stage of some shows" → rephrased to "street performances."

  8. Original: As I am inches citizen I used to recommend there to friends.
    Corrected: As a citizen of Incheon, I often recommend it to friends.
    Explanation:

    • "inches" → corrected to "Incheon’s" or "of Incheon."

    • "used to recommend" → changed to "often recommend" for present action.

  9. Original: My son and I went to there.
    Corrected: My son and I went there.
    Explanation: "went to there" is incorrect—just say "went there."


Final Edited Text:

 

Sometimes, when a school anniversary falls near a weekend or a national holiday in Korea, schools have a long break based on the principal’s decision. That time is now. We already planned a trip for the last week of the month, so it wasn’t a big deal. Wolmi Park is an amusement park located near Incheon. When someone comes to Incheon, it’s one of the main attractions. You can see the sea, take a cruise, and enjoy street performances. As a citizen of Incheon, I often recommend it to friends. My son and I went there.


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