My puppy is one years old.
My puppy is white and nice.
My puppy is small. It weights 2.5 kliograms.
I will introduce 3 cutist moments of my puppy.
First, It is when my puppy is sleeping because she looks like angel.
Second, It is when my puppy brings toy to me because she looks like a baby.
Third, It is when my puppy waits until I give food because she feels like a mother to me.
There is a puppy in my home. ✅
My puppy is one years old. ✅
My puppy is white and nice. ✅
My puppy is small. ✅
It weights 2.5 kliograms. = It weighs 2.5 kliograms. [ TIP: Use "weigh"or "weighs" as the verb.]
I will introduce 3 cutist moments of my puppy. = I will introduce 3 cutest moments of my puppy.
First, it is when my puppy is sleeping because she looks like angel. ✅ [TIP: use small letter i instead of the big I ]
Second, it is when my puppy brings toy to me because she looks like a baby. = Second, it is when my puppy brings a toy to me because she looks like a baby.
Third, it is when my puppy waits until I give food because she feels like a mother to me. ✅
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Hi Challina! Your puppy seems very adorable! You are lucky you can have one. Have lots of fun together! :) - t.Mischa
