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Question and Ansewr about Renting a House

1. Talk about when you were looking for a house to live in.
Because I didn't have enough money, I had thought I couldn't find the right hour for me.
The house I visited first was much older and shabbier than I thought. After visiting there, I was so depressed.
Then, I visited the next house. Though it was smaller tant first one, it was tidier.
It was ther right house for me except kitchen. So, I madeq a contract.

2. Did you get help from a real estate anency? What kind of help did they give you?
Yes, I did. They searched the right house for me and they helped me write up a contract.

3. How much do you pay for rent every month? Do you thing it is too much or not?
I have a lease on this house I live in. I paid a hundred million and five hundreds million won for 2years.
Though I can get it back, It's too much for my house size.

1. Talk about when you were looking for a house to live in.
Because I didn't have enough money, I had thought I couldn't find the right hour for me.
The house I visited first was much older and shabbier than I thought. After visiting there, I was so depressed.
Then, I visited the next house. Though it was smaller tant first one, it was tidier.
It was ther right house for me except kitchen. So, I madeq a contract.

2. Did you get help from a real estate anency? What kind of help did they give you?
Yes, I did. They searched the right house for me and they helped me write up a contract.

3. How much do you pay for rent every month? Do you thing it is too much or not?
I have a lease on this house I live in. I paid a hundred million and five hundreds million won for 2years.
Though I can get it back, It's too much for my house size.

 

Correction:

 

 

1. Let’s talk about when you were looking for a house to live in?
Because I don’t   have enough money, I haven’t thought that I could find the right house for me.
The house I visited first was much older and shabbier than I thought. After visiting there, I was so depressed.
Then, I visited the next house. Though it was smaller than the first one, it was tidier.
It was the right house for me except for the kitchen. So, I made a contract.

2. Did you get help from a real estate agency? What kind of help did they give you?
Yes, I did. They searched the right house for me and they helped me write up a contract.

3. How much do you pay for rent every month? Do you think it is too much or not?
I have a lease on this house I live in. I paid a hundred million and five hundred million won for 2years.
Though I can get it back, it’s too much for my house size.


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