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This issue written for my homework of UX Design course that I was learning.

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Project Idea

# 3 Redesign “Spotify”
- Spotify provides streaming and downloading music. Although Spotify is served on mobile app and desktop app this project is limited to Spotify mobile app.
- User cannot upload or edit their profile photo despite of it is shown on many screens like friends’ list and followers’ list.
- I’ll try to verify it is common inconvenience to Spotify mobile app users ar first. And I’ll try to discover how I makes it better through UX design process.
- (I’m worried that if it is too tiny feature for project.)

# 4 Redesign “FairPrice online”
- FairPrice online is one of the biggest online retail market in Singapore. Although FairPrice is served on mobile app and internet browser this project is limited to FairPrice mobile app.
- As a FairPrice mobile app user, I felt some inconveniences using it. When I click back button of android device this app shut down not goes back to a previous screen. And product detail screen doesn’t provide any related product for users. Besides, user cannot recognize delivery fee before opening a folder on checking out screen. There are many other inconvenience points.
- I’ll try to check other user feel like me and what is the most inconvenient to user. And I’ll try to discover how I makes it better through UX design process.

This issue was written for my homework in UX Design course that I am learning.

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Project Idea

# 3 Redesign “Spotify”
- Spotify provides streaming and downloading music. Although Spotify is served on mobile app and desktop app, this project is limited to Spotify mobile app.
- User cannot upload or edit their profile photo despite of it is shown on many screens like friends’ list and followers’ list.
- I’ll try to verify if it is a common inconvenience to Spotify mobile app users first. I’ll also try to discover how I can make it better through UX design process.
- (I’m worried if it is a tiny feature for this project.)

# 4 Redesign “FairPrice online”
- FairPrice online is one of the biggest online retail market in Singapore. Although FairPrice is served on mobile app and internet browser, this project is limited to FairPrice mobile app.
- As a FairPrice mobile app user, I felt some inconveniences using it. When I click the back button of my android device, this app shuts down. It doesn't go back to the previous screen. Also, the product detail screen doesn’t provide any related product for users. Besides, user cannot recognize delivery fee before opening a folder on checking out screen. There are many other inconveniences with this app.
- I’ll try to check if other users feel the same way and what is the most inconvenient to users. I’ll try to discover how I can make it better through UX design process.


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