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Hi Charm

Tomorrow I have to work so I delay next class, See you on Friday:)
anyway, I prepare my answer. Would you check this answer once???
I have 3 strength. First, I am an outgoing person. I love to communicate with other people. second, I am a quick-learner. I can easily adapt in any kind of situation. And I am responsible person. I can't easily give up any task. Also I always put my best to finish my work.
On the other hand, my weakness is a quick temper. Because of that, sometimes I've missed detail. To improve this weakness, I try to think about the process more importantly.

Tomorrow I have to work so I delay next class, See you on Friday:)
anyway, I prepare my answer. Would you check this answer once???
I have 3 strength. First, I am an outgoing person. I love to communicate with other people. second, I am a quick-learner. I can easily adapt in any kind of situation. And I am responsible person. I can't easily give up any task. Also I always put my best to finish my work.
On the other hand, my weakness is a quick temper. Because of that, sometimes I've missed detail. To improve this weakness, I try to think about the process more importantly.

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Hello, Hana! Thanks for telling me about this! ^^

Tomorrow, I have to work so I delayed our class. See you on Friday. :)

Anyway, I prepared my answer. Would you please check my answer?

I have 3 greatest strengths. First, I am an outgoing person. I love to meet and communicate with other people. Second, I am a quick learner. I can easily adapt in any kind of situations. And lastly, I am a responsible person. I always put my best to finish every work that I have and I don't easily give up in any tasks that they have given me. 

On the other hand, my weakness is that I have a short temper. Because of that, I sometimes missed some details of my work. I tried to deal with it by thinking about the more important processes to finish every work that I have.

Let's talk about it more on Friday!

 

 

 

 


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