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I’m starting to have prematurely gray hair. One day I found a gray hair. After that I’ve tried to find gray hair whenever I wash my face habitually. It made me sad. I didn’t realized how old I am usually. Others also don’t know how old I am. They misunderstood I’m in mid-twenties. Gray hair let me know that I’m getting old. I told my friends about my gray hair and how I feel sad. But some of friends said they’ve dyed colors since twenties. Gray hair is genetics. Their words comforted me. Getting old is sad. We need to accept aging. Our generation is different with our parents generation. We’re younger in many ways than the previous generation. My parents generation had no spare to take care of themselves. They got married very early, had babies and worked from very early ages. They didn’t have spare to wander their life. They just concentrated to make money for family. But our generation have enough time and money to care ourselves. We eat good food and exercise to maintain our youth. Maybe our generation are happy in some ways. But it also has disadvantages. We have enough time to consider about our life. What do I want to and how should I live etc. Many youth today wander and feel empty. We need to know our purpose of life. We can learn anything and go anywhere what we want. Age is not important. Today is the youngest day of rest of my life. One actress felt that it was too late to learn to surf at forty six years old. After six years she surf very well and she realized that if she didn’t try that time what a sad. We don’t need to give up because of the ages.

I’m starting to have premature gray hair. One day, I found a strand of gray hair. After that I’ve tried to find some gray hair whenever I wash my face. It made me sad. I didn’t realized how old I am usually. Others also don’t know how old I am. They misunderstood I’m in mid-twenties. Gray hair are signs that I’m getting old. I told my friends about my gray hair and how I felt. Some of friends said they’ve dyed theirs since in their twenties. Gray hair is in our genes. Their words has comforted me. It's sad to get old. We need to accept aging. Our generation is different with our parents generation. We’re younger in many ways than the previous generation. My parents generation had no spare time to take care of themselves. They got married at an early age; had babies and worked from very early ages. They didn’t have spare to wander their life. They just concentrated to make money for family; but in our our generation, we have enough time and money to care ourselves. We eat good food and exercise to maintain our youth. Maybe our generation are more happy in some ways. Although, it also has disadvantages. We have enough time to consider about our life. What I wanted to do and how should I live etc. The youth these days wander but they feel empty. We need to know our purpose of life. We can learn anything and go anywhere what we want. Age is not important. Today is the youngest day of rest of my life. One actress felt that it was too late to learn to surf at forty six years old. After six years, she surfs  well and she realized that if she didn’t try that time; she might regret. We don’t need to give up because of the ages.


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