I think so too. This school has lots of good things.
So I tell you about that.
First, teachers are too kind and gentle.
When we have difficult problem, teachers are helping us kindly.
Second, the lunches are great. The taste is surely delicious and the size is amazing.
Last, we have big playground. It is good at playing soccer.
However, We don't have any time to learn in the playground.
Because other senior students use playground.
If we can use playground, we will pay the soccer very happily.
Like that I like this school,so I will go to the school and try to have
many friends.
Thank you for reading.
I go Korea Middle school.Teacher and other say it is one of the greatest middle school in our country.
I think so too. This school has lots of good things.
So I tell you about that.
First, teachers are too kind and gentle.
When we have difficult problem, teachers are helping us kindly.
Second, the lunches are great. The taste is surely delicious and the size is amazing.
Last, we have big playground. It is good at playing soccer.
However, We don't have any time to learn in the playground.
Because other senior students use playground.
If we can use playground, we will pay the soccer very happily.
Like that I like this school,so I will go to the school and try to have
many friends.
Thank you for reading.
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I go Korea Middle School. People say it is one of the greatest middle school in our country.
I think so too. This school has lots of good things.
First, the teachers are kind and gentle.
Whenever we have problems, the teachers are always there to help us.
Second, the lunches are great. They taste delicious and the serving is enough to sate us.
Last, we have a big playground. It is good for playing soccer.
However, we don't get the chance to play in the playground, because senior students mostly use it.
If we'll be given a change to play in the playground, we would happily play soccer.
These are the reasons why I like my school. I look forward to going to school every day and make more friends.
Thank you for reading.
