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Children's day..

2021.05.11

요청내용

Yesterday was Children's Day.
I celebrated the Children's Day with my daughter.
I'm glad she had a good time all day^^

첨삭내용

Yesterday was Children's Day.
I celebrated the Children's Day with my daughter.
I'm glad she had a good time all day^^

Correction:

Yesterday was Children's Day.

I celebrated Children's Day with my daughter.

I'm glad she had a good time all day^^

수강정보

필리핀 전화영어 주 2회 30분 4주

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Talk Talk Talk 1

[시니어] 프리토킹

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