My dream job is one earning a lot of money. Because if I have a lot of money, I can eat delicious food to my heart's content and live in a comfortable house. It's been my dream job of becoming a doctor. But as my journey as a student continue and subjects are getting harder, I don't think I will meet the standard grades so I gave up my dream job of becoming a doctor. Whenever I go to school, I always think of what my dream is. I want to know it by myself but still can't figure it out. Then I realized, it's okay if I don't have a dream job yet. I'm still young. I don't think there's no need to hurry thinking about the distant future.
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Dream jobs
2022.05.24
I hope my dream job is a make a lo of money. Because if I have a lot of money, I can eat delicious food to my heart's content and live in a very good house. And I have long been a dream gob of being a doctor. But as the grades go up, I can not study vary well. So I gave up my dream job of being a doctor. After that, Whenever I study about job in school I wanted to find my new dream job.But I still can't find it. But it's okey. Because I don't think I need to think about the distant future.
수강정보
필리핀 전화영어 주 2회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 1 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
1999
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
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Melissa
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완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
clean the room
Therese"☎
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1997
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
workout
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1996
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
money
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1995
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Manny
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1994
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[17번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
Mary
2021.05.04
1993
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Help elementary students with their studies
Melissa
2021.05.04
1992
완료
[24번째 영작 첨삭]
My friends
-
2021.05.03
1991
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
The family meal is important
Melissa
2021.05.03
1990
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Think about a wild animal that you have seen or would like to see some day.
-
2021.05.03
1989
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
My grandmother's new house
Charm
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1988
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
Should we aware events that occur in other countries?
Melissa
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1987
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
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Melissa
2021.05.02
1986
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Start right away or wait until we get the good idea?
Melissa
2021.05.01
1985
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
Technology made children less creative.
Melissa
2021.05.01
1984
완료
[23번째 영작 첨삭]
Why like Coco the movie
-
2021.04.30
1983
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
About my homework.
Mary
2021.04.30
1982
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
The majority of business owners are driven solely by the pursuit of wealth- (disagree)
Melissa
2021.04.30
1981
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
My friend interview
-
2021.04.28
1980
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
The elderly need exercise more than young people do.
Melissa
2021.04.28