My dream job is one earning a lot of money. Because if I have a lot of money, I can eat delicious food to my heart's content and live in a comfortable house. It's been my dream job of becoming a doctor. But as my journey as a student continue and subjects are getting harder, I don't think I will meet the standard grades so I gave up my dream job of becoming a doctor. Whenever I go to school, I always think of what my dream is. I want to know it by myself but still can't figure it out. Then I realized, it's okay if I don't have a dream job yet. I'm still young. I don't think there's no need to hurry thinking about the distant future.
영작교정
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Dream jobs
2022.05.24
I hope my dream job is a make a lo of money. Because if I have a lot of money, I can eat delicious food to my heart's content and live in a very good house. And I have long been a dream gob of being a doctor. But as the grades go up, I can not study vary well. So I gave up my dream job of being a doctor. After that, Whenever I study about job in school I wanted to find my new dream job.But I still can't find it. But it's okey. Because I don't think I need to think about the distant future.
수강정보
필리핀 전화영어 주 2회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 1 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
1979
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
Think about a beautiful place that you have visited before.
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2021.04.27
1978
완료
[38번째 영작 첨삭]
Fuzzle
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2021.04.27
1977
완료
[37번째 영작 첨삭]
Quiz Battle
-
2021.04.27
1976
완료
[44번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear Ruby
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2021.04.27
1975
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear Ruby
-
2021.04.27
1974
완료
[16번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary.
Mary
2021.04.27
1973
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Bicycle
-
2021.04.27
1972
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Surprise good news.
-
2021.04.26
1971
완료
[15번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
Mary
2021.04.26
1970
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
My first English diary
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2021.04.26
1969
완료
[98번째 영작 첨삭]
script
Melissa
2021.04.25
1968
완료
[97번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
Melissa
2021.04.25
1967
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
History
Melissa
2021.04.24
1966
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
I lost money
Therese"☎
2021.04.24
1965
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
shopping
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2021.04.23
1964
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
About detention
Mary
2021.04.23
1963
완료
[20번째 영작 첨삭]
what school rules do you like? what rules you don't like?
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2021.04.23
1962
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My school
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2021.04.22
1961
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
A tough day~
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2021.04.22
1960
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
Who is your favorite singer?
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2021.04.22