When we finished the dinner, we went our home. It was very great day!
Today, I went to my grandmother's house. My grandmother moved to another apartment last week, but I can't go to see her new house so I was happy when we visited her. The house was not very far from my house, so we can go to her house as fast as her previous house. Her new house was smaller than her previous house, but I like it. And, I am glad to see my grandmother. We talked about our life these days and we ate lunch together. It was delicious! I watched TV and play with my brother. In the afternoon, my grandfather came and we ate dinner all together. We had meat. My brother ate well, so I was happy. We went back home after dinner. It was a very great day!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful time with your family last weekend. ^^
Anyway, please practice to use pronouns and punctuations, comma.
Pronouns will help you minimize repetitive words. ^^
Talk to you tomorrow ^^ Have a happy week ~
