The country I visit is France. France is very famous in Europe because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France? I will see the Eiffel Tower, Are de Triomphe, the Louvre museum and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do, the Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand and the Louvre museum's famous work of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
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France
2022.04.25
The country I visit is the France.France is very famous in the Europe. Because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France. I will see the Eiffel Tower,Are de Triomphe, Louvre museum.and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do,Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand And Louvre museum famous works of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures of the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 2 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
1999
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
It's better to spend money on trips than to put it aside for the future. -(Disagree)
Melissa
2021.05.05
1998
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
clean the room
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1997
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
workout
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1996
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
money
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1995
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Manny
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1994
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
Mary
2021.05.04
1993
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Help elementary students with their studies
Melissa
2021.05.04
1992
완료
[24번째 영작 첨삭]
My friends
-
2021.05.03
1991
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
The family meal is important
Melissa
2021.05.03
1990
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Think about a wild animal that you have seen or would like to see some day.
-
2021.05.03
1989
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
My grandmother's new house
Charm
2021.05.02
1988
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
Should we aware events that occur in other countries?
Melissa
2021.05.02
1987
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Is it acceptable to neglect environmental concern to promote economic growth?
Melissa
2021.05.02
1986
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Start right away or wait until we get the good idea?
Melissa
2021.05.01
1985
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
Technology made children less creative.
Melissa
2021.05.01
1984
완료
[23번째 영작 첨삭]
Why like Coco the movie
-
2021.04.30
1983
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
About my homework.
Mary
2021.04.30
1982
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
The majority of business owners are driven solely by the pursuit of wealth- (disagree)
Melissa
2021.04.30
1981
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
My friend interview
-
2021.04.28
1980
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
The elderly need exercise more than young people do.
Melissa
2021.04.28