The country I visit is France. France is very famous in Europe because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France? I will see the Eiffel Tower, Are de Triomphe, the Louvre museum and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do, the Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand and the Louvre museum's famous work of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
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France
2022.04.25
The country I visit is the France.France is very famous in the Europe. Because there are many beautiful buildings. May I go to France. I will see the Eiffel Tower,Are de Triomphe, Louvre museum.and champs-Elysee street. The champs-Elysee street looks like have a lot to do,Eiffel tower looks beautiful and grand And Louvre museum famous works of the world and Leo the Last Supper and other popular figures of the works are many, Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 2 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
1979
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
Think about a beautiful place that you have visited before.
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2021.04.27
1978
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[38번째 영작 첨삭]
Fuzzle
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2021.04.27
1977
완료
[37번째 영작 첨삭]
Quiz Battle
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2021.04.27
1976
완료
[44번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear Ruby
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2021.04.27
1975
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear Ruby
-
2021.04.27
1974
완료
[16번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary.
Mary
2021.04.27
1973
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Bicycle
-
2021.04.27
1972
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Surprise good news.
-
2021.04.26
1971
완료
[15번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
Mary
2021.04.26
1970
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
My first English diary
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2021.04.26
1969
완료
[98번째 영작 첨삭]
script
Melissa
2021.04.25
1968
완료
[97번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
Melissa
2021.04.25
1967
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
History
Melissa
2021.04.24
1966
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
I lost money
Therese"☎
2021.04.24
1965
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
shopping
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2021.04.23
1964
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
About detention
Mary
2021.04.23
1963
완료
[20번째 영작 첨삭]
what school rules do you like? what rules you don't like?
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2021.04.23
1962
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My school
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2021.04.22
1961
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
A tough day~
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2021.04.22
1960
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
Who is your favorite singer?
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2021.04.22