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I have worked at sports betting company for 4 years.
we have many games whcich related Sports such as football,basesball,volleyball,golf and so on.
The game's rule is predicting the sprorts game's result. If someone correts the game's reuslt, He will get money.
Multiply payment by dividend rate will be payout.

This buinsness is controlled by Korea Sprorts Promotion Foundation which sponsered by government.
All the profit from sports betting are used making funds for sponsoring for Unpopular sports or,disability sports, constructing new stadium and so on. This funds contribute to develop korea sports.

My duty is managing the sportsbetting website "betman".
I will explain how to betting sports game on internet.

First, join our website,(foreigner can't join this website)
Second, Left of top on website, You will see "guidebook for beginner user.
If you scan this guidebook, you will get easy to know about sportsbetting rules.

Third, players need to charge money like as cyber money.

If the money will charge, you can enjoy the game.

Fourth, Enroll your own acoount number.(account number which under disguised ownership is impossible to enroll)
If you win the game, Payout deposit in your account directly.

I have been working at sports betting company for 4 years. We have many games which are related to Sports such as football, baseball, volleyball, golf and so on. The game's rule is predicting the sport game's result. If someone got the correct game's result, He will get money. Multiply payment by dividend rate will be payout. This business is controlled by Korea Sports Promotion Foundation which is sponsored by government. All the profits from sports betting are used for sponsoring unpopular sports, disability sports, constructing new stadium and so on. These funds contribute to the development of sports in Korea. My duty is managing the sports betting website "bet man". I will explain how to bet sports game on internet. First, join our website (foreigner can't join this website). Second, on the top left side of the website, you will see a guidebook for beginner users. If you scan this guidebook, you will easily know about sports betting rules. Third, players need to charge money like in cyber money. If the money will charge, you can enjoy the game. Fourth, enroll your own account number. (Account number which under disguised ownership is impossible to enroll.) If you win the game, Payout deposit will be in your account directly. TIPS AND CORRECTIONS: 1. I have been working at sports betting company for 4 years. *We should use present perfect continuous (has/have + been + present participle) not present perfect for something that started in the past and has continued up until now. 2. Please explain more this idea. “Multiply payment by dividend rate will be payout.” 3. “This business is controlled by Korea Sports Promotion Foundation which is sponsored by government.” – This idea is a good example of present passive sentence. [Thing receiving action] + [be] + [past participle of verb] + [by] + [thing doing action] This business + is + controlled + by + Korea Sports Promotion Foundation. 4. “I will explain how to betting sports game on internet.” *When you use “to + verb”, the verb should be in present form like “to bet”.

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