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My last weekend

I went to Muju last weekend. I traveled with my mom, brother and grandmother. I was very happy.
First, we ate lunch at Muju. I ate meat and some herbs. It was very delicious! Then, we went to Deogyu mountain. This mountain is a national park.I was expected! We planned to go to a temple called 백련사. But when we walked the forest, my brother said: I can't go 백련사 anymore. I'm very tired. So my brother and my mom should go back our pension. So grandmother and I go to 백련사. But! I can't go anymore, too. So, unfortunately we had to go back too. I regret it....
In the evening, we rested at a pension. It was peaceful and cozy.
This travel was very funny! I want to go to Muju again in the future.

I went to Muju last weekend. I travelled there with my mom, my brother and my grandmother. I was very happy.
First, we ate lunch at Muju. I ate meat and some herbs. It was very delicious! Then, we went to Deogyu Mountain. This mountain is a national park. I was excited! We planned to go to a temple called Baeglyeonsa (
백련사). But when we were already walking in the forest, my brother said that he can't go 백련사 anymore. I'm very tired. So my brother and my mom went back to our pension. My grandmother and I continued to walk up the 백련사. But, I can't go anymore, too. So, unfortunately we had to go back too. I regret it....
In the evening, we rested at the pension. It was peaceful and cozy.
This travel was very fun! I want to go to Muju again in the future.


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