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I've been thinking about parenting my son for long times.
There are some questions in my thought like this..What is the best condition for him and sometimes I can feel like some anger when I'm with him because he's behavior. He hate all vegetable and fruit. He never eats like this thing...even thought he's 5 years old. When I'm angry to him, I struggle to calm down and try to understand his mind. I want to be a good mother. but I'm not sure that I'm a good mother NOW.
So I will keep trying to be a good mother.

I've been thinking about parenting my son for a long time.
There are some questions in my thoughts like, “what is the best condition for him?” Sometimes, I sometimes feel angry when I'm with him because of his behavior. He hates all vegetables and fruits. He never eats those things even though he's 5 years old. When I'm angry at him, I struggle to calm down and try to understand his mind. I want to be a good mother but I'm not sure if I'm a good mother NOW.
So I will keep trying to be a good mother.

 

Tips:

1.    We don’t use “times” when we say “a long time.” You can say “for a very long time” also.

2.    When we are talking about a person’s feelings or things, we use possessive pronouns like his, her, my etc. So, in your idea, you said “he’s behavior or he is behavior”. You are talking about your son’s behavior. So, it should be “his behavior”.

 

 

Thank you, Misun for sending a message. Your sentences are doing well. I do believe that every mother wanted to be a good one and I think you are a good mother to your son. You are thinking about your son’s future especially about his school life. My nephew who is 2 years old doesn’t like some fruits and vegetables also. So, sometimes we do different ways to show him that fruits are delicious like doing fruit shakes. Then, we tell him that it’s really delicious and we introduce the fruits. There are times that I tell him that it is good for health and what benefits he can get from it. We cannot force children to like vegetables quickly. We just need to be patient with them. I know you can do it, Misun. Ajah!!! ^_^ 


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