Lisa is an 18 year old girl that hates her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but to her surprise, one day, for no reason at all, she eventually became very pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how it happened, Lana always explains to her that she went to another dimension to fulfil her dream. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks had passed Lana can see the sadness in Lisa’s eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life. “ “Fine but promise me that nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa’s birthday and they needed to go back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back anymore. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me to my room. Actually there is a secret portal to the 2nd dimension there. I go there a lot. I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is the one who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it at first.”
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Jin01
2020.08.03
Lisa is a s 18 year old girl that doesn’t like her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but, one day, somehow she became super pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how she became pretty, Lana will always say she went to another dimension. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks passing, Lana can see the depression in Lisa eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life.“ “Fine but promise nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa birthday and they needed to get back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me, my room actually has a secret connection to the 2nd dimension. I go there a lot, I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is The Who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it first.”
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