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A hectic day

My mom and younger brother had an argument about school.
And it’s raining cats and dogs. What a hectic day!

Since the college application period is over, my younger brother’s friends often skip school, and he wants to join them.
He said, “I’m going to graduate anyway”, so my mom scolded him more since it is lack of commitment.

He’s planning to study automotive engineering.
(It seems like he’s going the university just because he likes cars. haha)

(Answer about “Asking about quantities”)
: I eat at least one everyday. These days, I eat bananas and peaches. l like all fruits except durian.

As soon as I finished reviewing the class, the rain stopped..
I hope it doesn’t rain during the next class.
Have a good day~

My mom and younger brother had an argument about school.
And it’s raining cats and dogs. What a hectic day!

Since the college application period is over, my younger brother’s friends often skip school, and he wants to join them.
He said, “I’m going to graduate anyway”, so my mom scolded him more since it is lack of commitment.

He’s planning to study automotive engineering.
(It seems like he’s going the university just because he likes cars. haha)

(Answer about “Asking about quantities”)
: I eat at least one everyday. These days, I eat bananas and peaches. l like all fruits except durian.

As soon as I finished reviewing the class, the rain stopped..
I hope it doesn’t rain during the next class.
Have a good day~ 

CORRECTION: 

Here’s a polished version of that part.

  • He’s planning to study automotive engineering.
    (It seems like he’s going to university just because he likes cars. haha)

Answer about “Asking about quantities”:
I eat at least one every day. These days, I eat bananas and peaches. I like all fruits except durian.

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REPLY:

Thank you for sharing about your day!  I can understand why she scolded your brother; commitment to school is important, especially before graduation. It’s interesting that he wants to study automotive engineering; his love for cars might help him stay motivated. By the way, it’s nice that you eat fruit every day! Bananas and peaches are healthy choices. I also like mangoes, watermelon, and coconut. Let’s hope the next class is sunny and peaceful. 

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