Trip to the Gangwon-do

Our family went to Gangwon-do. There we went to swimming pool, beach, creak.etc
I think that beach is most fun so I will tell about my experience there.
Gyeongpo beach is very large and popular so we took lots of time to park.
like a miracle my father find a park place!
so we go to there. there is very big wave and splendid view.
me and my brother go into the wave and back up.
we repeat it and it is very fun. and I go to dipper place with dad
while my brother is making a sand castle.
It is great they with my family.

Title: My Family’s Trip to Gangwon-do (This title is more personalized) 

Our family went to Gangwon-do. There, we visited a swimming pool, a beach, and a creek.
I think the beach was the most fun, so I will tell you about my experience there.

Gyeongpo Beach is very large and popular, so it took a long time to find parking.
Like a miracle, my father found a parking space!

We went to the beach. There were big waves and a beautiful view.
My brother and I ran into the waves and then came back.
We repeated this many times, and it was very fun.
Then I went to the deeper part of the water with my dad,
while my brother made a sandcastle on the beach.

 

It was a great day with my family.