On march 9th We went to the NAGOYA trip with my family and first time when we alived NAGOYA we went INYAMA CASTLE. And that was good. After that we went to monkey centre! There was many monkey, golila! And we smelled the monkey's poop smell. that was yunky! And next day we went LEGO LAND.
CORRECTION:
On March 9th, my family and I went on a trip to Nagoya. When we first arrived, we visited Inuyama Castle, which was great. After that, we went to a monkey center where we saw many monkeys and even a gorilla! However, the smell of monkey poop was unpleasant. The next day, we visited LEGOLAND.
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