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How God was able to help you during difficult times?

When I was an universety student, I had a crisis of conscience(faith). At that time, I couldn't find why I had to sutdy and what important was in my life. Excessive competition and studying in the entrance examination had destroyed my soul. I liked to hang out with friends. I drunk too much. I more liked things of world than the Lord. Even I didnt go to church on Sunday. I wasted valuable school days. I got poor result in the university.
However God made me realize again through the people arond me. A friend of my class, a domitory roommate led me to the pre-teacher's mission. By joining as a member of it,I realized that I was the daughter of God and why I chose the educational university.
In my story, there was nothing like miracle. I haven't had mysterious and surprising experiences. But the Lord has always been with me so far. Although I'm very poor and humble, He made me a mother of precious children and a teacher to teach students. In addition, Through the Lord I met and married a very nice man who is faithful and warm-hearted. All these things are grace of God.

When I was a universety student, I had a crisis of conscience(faith). At that time,  I couldn't find  I couldn't understand why I had to study and  what important was in my life what things are important in my life. Excessive competition and studying in the entrance examination had destroyed my soul. I liked to hang out with friends. I drunk too much. I more liked things of world than the Lord I like worldy things than the Lord. Even I didnt go to church on Sunday. Even going to church on Sunday. I wasted valuable school days. I got poor result in the university.
However, God made me realize again  God made me realize a lot of things through the people around me. A friend of  A friend from my class, a domitory roommate led me to the pre-teacher's mission.By joining as a member of it By joining as a member I realized that I was the daughter,I realized that I was a daughter of God and that's why I chose the educational university.
In my story, there was nothing like miracle. I haven't had mysterious and surprising experiences. But the Lord has always been with me so far. Although I'm very poor and humble, He made me a mother of precious children and a teacher to teach students. In addition, Through  the Lord I met and married a very nice man who is faithful and warm-hearted. All these things are the grace of God.   

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