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What have you sacrificed for your children?

What have you sacrificed for your children?

My children have always been my priority. I spend most of my time raising my children. Before I had children, I liked to read books and exercise in my own time, I went to the Training center to play sports equipment or learn yoga. I liked to take a walk and meet my friends, but it was impossible after giving birth to a child. It is hard for me to take enough time to study English and practice my plans to learn piano. And it is difficult to meet friends or attend a social gathering with fellow teachers. My husband and I have very little time our own. We have given up going to the movies and going to nice restaurants together. We go to the playground instead of cafe. And I don‘t spend much money for myself. Instead of buying what I like, I am happier buying the children's toys. Since children's education cost is a priority, I think one more time to buy anything.
When I first met my baby, I was afraid my life would completely change and I would be responsible for my child's life. But nothing else can replace the joy of loving and watching my children’s grow. I am willing to sacrifice myself for my children. Thankfully I am growing up as a mother.

What have you sacrificed for your children?

My children  have  has always been my priority. I spend most of my time raising my children. Actually, before I had children, I liked to read books and exercise in my own free time. I went to the Training center to play sports equipment or learn yoga. I liked to take a walk and meet my friends, but it was impossible after giving birth to a child. It is hard for me to take enough time to study English and practice my plans to learn  playing piano. And  Also,it is difficult for me to  meet my friends or attend a social gathering with my fellow teachers. My husband and I have very little time our own My husband and I have a very little time to go on dates and or quality time together. We have given up going to the movies and going to nice restaurants together. However, we go to the playground instead of cafe. And I don‘t spend much money for myself. Instead of buying what I like, I am happier buying the my children's toys. Since children's education cost is a priority, I think one more time to buy anything. I think twice before buying anything.
 
When I first met my first baby, I was afraid that my life would completely change because I would be responsible for my child's life. But nothing else can replace the joy of loving and watching my children’s children growing. In fact, I am willing to sacrifice myself for my children. Thankfully, I am growing up as a mother.

 


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