Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
영작교정
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
2619
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
jace
Lin
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2618
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
New me 3
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2022.03.15
2617
완료
[39번째 영작 첨삭]
I am a middle school student
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2022.03.15
2616
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
New me 2
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2022.03.15
2615
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
New me1
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2022.03.15
2614
완료
[23번째 영작 첨삭]
I am a middle school student
-
2022.03.15
2613
완료
[51번째 영작 첨삭]
being a middle school student
Disney
2022.03.15
2612
완료
[39번째 영작 첨삭]
I am a middle school student
Disney
2022.03.15
2611
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
middle school.
-
2022.03.15
2610
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
hi
Test
2022.03.15
2609
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Today
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2022.03.15
2608
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Camping
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2022.03.14
2607
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Q & A (2) (?)
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2022.03.14
2606
완료
[23번째 영작 첨삭]
My dad
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2022.03.14
2605
완료
[31번째 영작 첨삭]
My experience 1-4
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2022.03.13
2604
완료
[30번째 영작 첨삭]
My experience 1-3
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2022.03.13
2603
완료
[29번째 영작 첨삭]
My experience 1-2
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2022.03.13
2602
완료
[28번째 영작 첨삭]
My experience 1-1
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2022.03.13
2601
완료
[171번째 영작 첨삭]
script - music
Melissa
2022.03.13
2600
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
I am introducing myself
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