Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
2559
접수
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
2022.2.10
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2022.02.10
2558
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
my favorite actress
Therese"☎
2022.02.10
2557
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My homework
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2022.02.09
2556
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
College life / mp3 file please
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2022.02.09
2555
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
hl
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2022.02.08
2554
완료
[165번째 영작 첨삭]
script - music
Melissa
2022.02.07
2553
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Have a nice day!
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2022.02.07
2552
완료
[164번째 영작 첨삭]
script - daily life
Melissa
2022.02.06
2551
완료
[163번째 영작 첨삭]
script - daily life
Melissa
2022.02.05
2550
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
My dairy life routine
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2022.02.03
2549
완료
[162번째 영작 첨삭]
script - daily life
Melissa
2022.02.02
2548
완료
[161번째 영작 첨삭]
script - daily life
Melissa
2022.02.01
2547
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
This is the letter included in my resume. Please corret the wrong sentence.
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2022.01.31
2546
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
Finally,
Therese"☎
2022.01.30
2545
완료
[160번째 영작 첨삭]
script - daily life
Melissa
2022.01.29
2544
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
In the book
Therese"☎
2022.01.29
2543
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Dreams will come true.
Therese"☎
2022.01.29
2542
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
holiday
Therese"☎
2022.01.27
2541
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
I'm tired.
Amarah
2022.01.27
2540
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
What kind of writing topic is good for English learners
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2022.01.26