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Don's birthday party

It was Friday, when we would celebrate Don’s, who is one of my coworker, birthday.
I bought a cake and dressed up for the night. The time we’d intended to meet was 7:30pm, all of the sudden it changed 15minutes before the time. So I had to be hurry not to be late. On the way the restaurant I was uncomfortable, because I thought I was late. Fortunately, I was on time.
We had a small talk meanwhile dinner was setting. We ordered foods that the owner recommended, and the meal was absolutely delicious especially the home-made garlic sauce was amazing. After finishing our meal, don’s friends started coming, and filling the tables. When almost everyone who was invited came, we gathered and started singing happy birthday song. It was cheerful and happy moment.
We had a chance to talk with one of his friends who is a model, He visited our office once, and he remember my boy friend’s standing desk, so that he explained about the advantage of it. His voice was gentle and kind so that he gave us positive first impression. Most of the time in there was full of joy. Therefore I would like to say thank Don for inviting me to the party. Everything was perfect to enjoy especially his speech before tossing.

It was Friday, when we would celebrated Don’s birthday,who is one of my co-worker.
I bought a cake and dressed up for the night. The time that we intended to meet was 7:30pm. All of a sudden, it was changed to15minutes before the time. So, I had to be hurry not to  so that I won't be late. On the way to the restaurant, I was uncomfortable because I thought I was late. Fortunately, I was on time.
We had a small talk. Meanwhile, dinner was set. We ordered foods that the owner recommended and the meal was absolutely delicious, especially the home-made garlic sauce was amazing. After finishing our meals, Don’s friends started coming, and filling the tables. When almost everyone who was invited came, we gathered and started singing a happy birthday song. It was a cheerful and happy moment.
We had a chance to talk with one of his friends who is a model. He visited our office once, and he remembered my boy friend’s standing desk, so that and he explained about the advantage of it. His voice was gentle and kind so that he gave us positive first impression. Most of the time in there was full of joy. Therefore, I would like to say thank you to Don for inviting me to the party. Everything was perfect to enjoy especially his speech before tossing.


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