When the weather is hot in Korea we eat patbingsu our ice cream.
Patbingsu is a adzuki-been past, milk, ice cream, sticky rice cake, fruit cocktail, and stuff like that on shaved ice cream.
It's very sweet and cold.
It's very refreshing too.
The weather in Korea is so hot these days.
When the weather is hot in Korea we eat patbingsu our ice cream.
Patbingsu is a adzuki-been past, milk, ice cream, sticky rice cake, fruit cocktail, and stuff like that on shaved ice cream.
It's very sweet and cold.
It's very refreshing too.
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These days, the weather in Korea is so hot.
During these days, we eat patbingsu, our favorite ice cream.
This Patbingsu is made of adzuki-been paste, milk, ice cream, sticky rice cake, fruit cocktail, and stuff like that on a shaved ice cream.
It's very sweet and cold.
It's very refreshing, too.
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