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Before I explain why I thought uniqueness of agriculture affect the company on the food chain negatively, I wanna speak my opinion.
I think the features of agriculture would be negative to companies on the food chain.

Let me explain why I thought that way specifically below.
The most reason is food productivity’s getting unstable year by year all around the world.

If the company doesn’t stock the amount of ingredient, they need to make another plan for their customer as soon as possible.

Before I explain why I thought uniqueness of agriculture affect the company on the food chain negatively, I wanna speak my opinion.
I think the features of agriculture would be negative to companies on the food chain.

Let me explain why I thought that way specifically below.
The most reason is food productivity’s getting unstable year by year all around the world.

If the company doesn’t stock the amount of ingredient, they need to make another plan for their customer as soon as possible.

 



Before I explain the reason why I decided that the uniqueness of agriculture affects the company in the food chain negatively, I want to state my opinion.
I think that the features of agriculture are negative to companies in the food chain.
Let me explain why I thought that way below.
The biggest reason is that food production is unstable year by year and from country to country.
If the company couldn’t stock the number of ingredients because of the instability of agriculture, they need to make another plan for their customers as soon as possible.
 
Your grammar is correct great job! Thank you!  Below are the protions of the article that will make it complete because it's lacking some important anecdotes about agriculture.
 
In this process, some risks could happen.
Perhaps complain from the customers, or missing big reservations.
And also agriculture has Seasonality, Biological lags in production, etc. Seasonality refers to periodic fluctuations in certain business areas and cycles that occur regularly based on a particular season. 
That means the company doesn’t easy to retain their stocks previously and there are limits to storing all of them greenly as well.
Even though, many companies pay to keep their stocks fresh.
I think those are the reasons why I think the uniqueness of agriculture has a negative effect on the companies in the food chain.
 
 

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