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After I took a year off, I went to China to preaching. Actually during that period, I didn’t need to work and I couldn’t work because I was still a teacher. But one day one sister introduced me a student who want to study Korean. After thinking about it for a long time, I accepted it. Because I thought that was a good experience to me. Since then, some of people wanted to study Korean from me. But I rejected other things. And I asked to God in prayer why gave me a job even though I never asked it and I didn’t need it. After few month a go , I realized that reason. One day I preached with Italian couple and had lunch together. I told them I started working while having a conversation. They were pleased as if it were their business. So I asked them why you were so pleased. Do you expect that I treat you? They said that they wanted me to stay China for a long time they prayed to God for my work. They regarded if I had a job in China, maybe I would stayed in China for a long time. That time I realized that Jehovah answered their prayers for them because their prayer were so desperate. At the same time he let me know clearly, he could help me to stay China even though if I quit my job. He is our provider. If we are willing to do his will, he will help and support us. If we give up something good in this world for doing God’s will, he will never disappoint us and give us more blessings. If we move to area where the need is greater, he will provide us everything we need.

After I took a year off, I went to China to preach. I didn’t need to work during that period, and I couldn’t work because I was still a teacher. But one day, one sister introduced me to a student who wanted to study Korean. After thinking about it for a long time, I accepted it. Because I thought that was an excellent experience for me. Since then, some people have wanted to study Korean from me, but I rejected others. And I asked God in prayer why he gave me a job even though I never requested it and didn’t need it. A few months ago, I realized that reason. One day I preached with an Italian couple and had lunch together. I told them I started working while having a conversation. They were pleased as if it were their business. So I asked them why they were so pleased. Do you expect that I treat you? They said they wanted me to stay in China for a long time they prayed to God for my work. They regarded if I had a job in China, maybe I would stay in China for a long time. I realized that Jehovah answered their prayers for them because their prayer was so desperate. At the same time, he let me know; clearly, he could help me stay in China even if I quit my job. He is our provider. If we are willing to do his will, he will help and support us. If we give up something good in this world for doing God’s will, he will never disappoint us and give us more blessings. If we move to an area where the need is more significant, he will provide everything we need.


수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 6주
교재
Speak Your Mind 1 (Senior Course)
[시니어] 프리토킹
번호
제목
작성자
튜터
작성일
1999
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-
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[6번째 영작 첨삭] The elderly need exercise more than young people do.
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