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Actually I used to wanna eat some boiled cockle from a few weeks ago.

Then in the nick of time, the lunch meal that is provided at company is not good so I was like hey Ji-hong, Jun ! how about having a lunch

outside? Instead of eating here.

When we sat down at the restaurant and ordered some Boiled Cockle and Bul-go-gi.

As soon as we ordered these food, appetizers was served on our table and appetizers looks so fresh and delicious that We'd worked up

an appetite.

After dining, We literally no need to have a to-go box because there was no leftover food on the table at all.

2 ing~
인생의 파트너와 함께하는게 집안일 하는데 도움이 되냐? 왜? 어떤 걸 선호하냐?

아니면 너는 혼자할래???? 오랫동안 혼자해왔으니까? 아니면 어느날 문득 누군가를 신경써야된다는게
부담이 될까?

혼자 살면 잔소리 없으니까..집안일 안 해도 되고 아 그리고 녹슨거나, 금간거나,물새거 금간거

곰팡이 낀 부품들 어케 관리해???

Actually I used to wanna eat some boiled cockle from a few weeks ago.

Then in the nick of time, the lunch meal that is provided at company is not good so I was like hey Ji-hong, Jun ! how about having a lunch ( The noun phrase company is missing a determiner,use an article ''the'' or ''a'') outside? Instead of eating here. ( Capitalized all the words in each sentences. Use a close quotation ( ''    .....   '')  if it you are to rephrase a dialog.
 
When we sat down at the restaurant and ordered some Boiled Cockle and Bul-go-gi. ( Hanging sentence it seems you need to add more to complete it.)

As soon as we ordered these food, appetizers was served on our table and appetizers looks so fresh and delicious that We'd worked up
( Use  -''were'') an appetite.

After dining, We literally no need to have a to-go box because there was no leftover food on the table at all.

2 ing~
인생의 파트너와 함께하는게 집안일 하는데 도움이 되냐? 왜? 어떤 걸 선호하냐?

아니면 너는 혼자할래???? 오랫동안 혼자해왔으니까? 아니면 어느날 문득 누군가를 신경써야된다는게
부담이 될까?

혼자 살면 잔소리 없으니까..집안일 안 해도 되고 아 그리고 녹슨거나, 금간거나,물새거 금간거

곰팡이 낀 부품들 어케 관리해???

 

Actually, I used to wanna eat some boiled cockle from a few weeks ago.

Then in the nick of time, the lunch meal that were provided at the company was not good so I was like

''Hey Ji-hong, Jun! How about having lunch

 

outside? Instead of eating here.''

When we sat down at the restaurant and ordered some Boiled Cockle and Bul-go-gi ???? (What happened?) It's hanging...add something John.

As soon as we ordered this food, appetizers were served on our table and appetizers looked so fresh and delicious that we'd worked up
an appetite.

 

After dining, we literally do not need to have a to-go box because there were no leftover food on the table at all.

 


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