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It's been rainy for 2 days in a row and It's cold thesedays. I hope rain stops soon.

Recenelty, a new restaurant has opened near my place. Literally, It's not new. It's 2nd branch of the restarant. They sell korean style hotdogs only which I like. Whenever I passed the first branch, There was such a long line for it. I was curious what appeals about it. It's just hotdog.

While my wife and I were taking a stroll, We passed the new restaurant and she wanted it. She asked me how many hotdogs I want, so I said that I don't want it as I'm on diet. She was saying that It wasn't a rhetorical question. She ordered a set menu in which there were three and I warned that it would too much. She laughed smugly.

Eventually, We ate all of it and I found out why people in the line waiting for it. We were short of hotdogs and she made fun of me not keeping what I said.

Thesedays, Many korean food are getting popular, as such the Bibigo Mandu which is a sort of dimsum.
I guess because of Netflix many korean food are easily shown to people abroad. The korean government has invested so much budget to introduce the korean food abroad for a long time but they've failed completly. Now we know how much influence the cultures have.

It's been rainy for 2 days in a row and It's cold thesedays. I hope rain stops soon.

Recenelty, a new restaurant has opened near my place. Literally, It's not new. It's 2nd branch of the restarant. They sell korean style hotdogs only which I like. Whenever I passed the first branch, There was such a long line for it. I was curious what appeals about it. It's just hotdog.

While my wife and I were taking a stroll, We passed the new restaurant and she wanted it. She asked me how many hotdogs I want, so I said that I don't want it as I'm on diet. She was saying that It wasn't a rhetorical question. She ordered a set menu in which there were three and I warned that it would too much. She laughed smugly.

Eventually, We ate all of it and I found out why people in the line waiting for it. We were short of hotdogs and she made fun of me not keeping what I said.

Thesedays, Many korean food are getting popular, as such the Bibigo Mandu which is a sort of dimsum.
I guess because of Netflix many korean food are easily shown to people abroad. The korean government has invested so much budget to introduce the korean food abroad for a long time but they've failed completly. Now we know how much influence the cultures have.

Correction:

It's been rainy for 2 days in a row and It's cold these days. I hope the rain stops soon.

Recenelty, a new restaurant has opened near my place. Literally, it's not new. It's the 2nd branch of the restarant. They sell korean style hotdogs the ones I only like. Whenever I passed the first branch, There was such a long line for it. I was curious what appeals about it. It's just hotdog.

While my wife and I were taking a stroll, We passed the new restaurant and she wanted it. She asked me how many hotdogs I want, so I said that I don't want it as I'm on diet. She was saying that It wasn't a rhetorical question. She ordered a set menu in which there were three and I warned that it would be too much. She laughed smugly.

Eventually, we ate all of it and I found out why people are lining up for it. We were short of hotdogs and she made fun of me for not keeping what I said.

Thesedays, many korean food are getting popular, such as the Bibigo Mandu which is a sort of dimsum.
I guess because of Netflix many korean food are easily shown to people abroad. The korean government has invested so much budget to introduce the korean food abroad for a long time but they've failed completly. Now we know how much influence the cultures have.


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