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So I was talking with some foreigners friends about preaching in India. If we kick out of China, maybe our next filed is India. But after few years, I already forgot about it. I happened to know Hindi class in online. Seoul Hindi congregation arranged Hindi begging level class. My friend told me bout it, I hesitated to attend it. When I came to my sense, I already attended Hindi class. I surprised that there were 62 students in Hindi class. Because of the Pandemic I could attend Hindi class on online. I live in Busan so I couldn’t attend Hindi class in Seoul. After that I had opportunity to attend ‘Hindi tour ‘ in online. I knew that India need a lot of publishers. One Japanese sister said that she has 20 bible study and more and more people want to study bible. I felt that maybe next preaching field is India. I felt that God made me focus on worth things not to negative thinking. I don’t know where I live and how I live my life after COVID19. I prayer to God let me know what I should do and where I live after Corona. Now I just prepare what I can do during pandemic. I wanted God using me and guide me. When I went to China, I asked to God two things. One thing is that I want to help person who want to know truth to be baptized from the begging. He answered the prayer. Another thing is to help me to meet my Mr.right who have same goal in spirituality and we help other people who want to know truth. God haven’t answered yet. I believe that God will answer my prayer in best time. I’m really expecting that how God answer my prayer.

Hi Zoe!^^


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So I was talking with some of my foreign friends about preaching in India. If we would be kicked out of China, maybe our next field is India. But after a few years, I already forgot about it. Then I happened to learn about a Hindi class online. Seoul Hindi Congregation arranged a Hindi begginner level class. My friend told me bout it but I hesitated to attend. When I came to my senses, I decided to attend the Hindi class. I was surprised that there were 62 students in the class. Because of the pandemic I could only attend the class online. I live in Busan so I couldn’t attend the Hindi class in Seoul. After I had the opportunity of attending ‘Hindi tour ‘ online, I knew that India needed a lot of publishers. One Japanese sister said that she has 20 bible studies and more and more people want to study the bible. I felt that maybe our next preaching field is India. I felt that God made me focus on worthy things, not on negative ones. I don’t know where I'll live and how I'll live my life after the pandemic. I pray to God to let me know what I should do and where I'll live after this. Now, I just prepare what I can do during pandemic. I want God to use and guide me. When I went to China, I asked two things from God. One was I wanted to help a person who wanted to know the truth and to be baptized spiritually. He answered it. Another one was to help me meet my Mr. Right who has the same goal as me in spirituality and who wants to help other people to know the truth. But God hasn't answered that yet. I believe that God will answer my prayer in His perfect time. I’m really expecting that God will answer my prayer.


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