I want to imporve my English ability.
I thougt if I meet you you maybe ask to me about my hobby.
I don't have special hobby. I just do watching movies, TV, waliking around like in the park.
My recommendation place is Seoul. Seoul has a various divisions like historical places and modern places. so if you visit Seoul you can experience vaious part of seoul.
I had my English name, but I think that name is really old-fashioned, so I want to change.
I want to improve my English ability.
I thought if I would meet you, you would ask me about my hobby.
I don't have any special hobbies. I just watch movies and TV and walking around the park.
I recommend you to visit Seoul. It has various divisions like historical and modern places, so if you visit Seoul you can experience various parts of it.
Hi, Nam Seok!
You write pretty well, however there are some minor errors that I've noticed. First, you have to check the spelling of words when you write. Second, when using conjuctions like; but and so, you don't need to separate them with period (.), just use comma (,) for the next clause. Lastly, when you write something about your hobbies, you should use the Simple Present Tense of the verbs.
