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People wondered that why I haven’t yet married. My friends and family said that I have high standard of man. Actually I’m not a celibate. If I meet my Mr. right, I will get merry. Someone said that I still have fantastic of marriage that’s why I can’t get merry. I disagree with that. I just wanted to meet man I really loved. I didn’t know that I haven’t yet married until now. Sometimes I also worried that I couldn’t get merry and grow old alone. What did I do to myself? How my life is going? My mom blame that I got punishment because I dumped many man and rejected many propose. That made me hurts. But they are not my real love. Some of the friends said that I already miss many chance to merry and make me feel that I failed. There is some benefits to get merry in late age. I came to know clearly that what kind of man I want to meet and what kind of life I want to live. I’m sure that I’m mature during my single life. I had lived as last daughter for 10 years so I tendency to depend others. I used to ask for help others. But I’ve changed to be independent. I can understand others who live alone or have some problems. Some of the woman who got married in very early age seem to stop to grow in mental at her merry age. Maybe they’ve lived around husband’s protect. And I can go anywhere in the world what I want to. I thing that single life need good friends to spend time together. Single friends can comfort one another. I believe that if I really need it, God will give me chance to meet my Mr. right. Until that time I will enjoy my single life!

People wondered that why I haven’t yet married.

- People wondered why I haven't gotten married yet.


My friends and family said that I have high standard of man.

- My friends and family said that I have high standards in men. 


Actually I’m not a celibate.

- Actually, I'm not celibate. 


If I meet my Mr. right, I will get merry.

- If I meet Mr. Right, I will get married


Someone said that I still have fantastic of marriage that’s why I can’t get merry.

- Someone said that I'm idealistic about marriage that's why I don't want to get married. 


I disagree with that. I just wanted to meet man I really loved.

- I disagree. I just want to meet a man that I really love.


I didn’t know that I haven’t yet married until now.

- I don't know why I haven't gotten married until now.  


Sometimes I also worried that I couldn’t get merry and grow old alone.

- Sometimes I'm also worried that I won't be able to get married and I will grow old alone.  


What did I do to myself? How my life is going?

- What have I done to myself? How's my life going?


My mom blame that I got punishment because I dumped many man and rejected many propose.

- My mom told me that I got punished because I dumped many men and rejected many proposals. 

 

That made me hurts.

- I got hurt.. 


But they are not my real love.

- They were not my true love. 


Some of the friends said that I already miss many chance to merry and make me feel that I failed.

- Some of my friends said hat I already missed many chances to get married and it made me feel like a falure.


There is some benefits to get merry in late age.

- There are some benefits of getting married at an older age.  


I came to know clearly that what kind of man I want to meet and what kind of life I want to live.

- I came to know clearly what kind of man I want to meet and what kind of life I want to live.


I’m sure that I’m mature during my single life.

- I'm sure that I got mature during my single life. 


I had lived as last daughter for 10 years so I tendency to depend others.

- I had lived as the youngest daughter for ten years so I tend to depend on others. 


I used to ask for help others.

- I used to ask help from others.


But I’ve changed to be independent.

- But I've learned how to be independent. 


I can understand others who live alone or have some problems.

- I understand other people who live alone or who have some problems.

 

Some of the woman who got married in very early age seem to stop to grow in mental at her merry age.

- Some of the women who got married at a very early age seem to stop growing mentally.  


Maybe they’ve lived around husband’s protect.

- Maybe they've lived under their husband's protection.

 

And I can go anywhere in the world what I want to.

- I can go anywhere in the world whenver or wherever I want to. 


I thing that single life need good friends to spend time together.

- I think single women need good friends around who they can spend their time with.  


Single friends can comfort one another.

- correct

 

I believe that if I really need it, God will give me chance to meet my Mr. right.

- I believe that if I really need it, God will give me chance to meet my Mr. Right.

 

Until that time I will enjoy my single life!

- Until that time comes, I will enjoy my single life. 


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