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Korea is a divided country. Whenever foreigner asked me where I am from and their next question is always North or South Korea I’m from. North Korea occasionally attacked to South Korea because of their benefit. They use this way to get what they want. But Korean are used to it. When I was young, if North Korea shot the missile or threaten to South Korea, most of Korean rush to supermarkets and panic buying. But now we didn’t do anymore. Because we already know that they just want to threaten us not to real attack. Many years ago, North Korea shot missile, the atmosphere is very serious. But we live as usual. Many foreigners were worried. So some foreigners who were native speaker in Korea left Korea without resignation. And some of my foreign friends called me and said come to their county quickly. Foreign press reported the situation Korea was very serious. But Korean didn’t care about it. In the past, politicians in South Korea used North Korea to control nation. But the publics in Korea are smart. We don’t fool politicians anymore. When I was young, we habitually mention that our wish is unification. But now, I know unification is not easy. After unification we need to many sacrifices until stability in economy and society. South and North Korea have serious economic gaps. After unification in Germany had many society and economic problems for many years. I want North Korea to change like China. They open to economic to develop even though they remain their communism. We try to interchange in many ways to reunification naturally in stability.

Korea is a divided into two countries. Whenever foreigner asked me where am I from, their next question is always if I'm from the North or South.  North Korea occasionally attacked to South Korea because of their benefit. They use this way to get what they want. South Koreans are used to it. When I was young, if North Korea will shot the missile or threaten South Korea, most of Korean rush to supermarkets and they panic buying. But now we don't care about it anymore because we already know that they just want to threaten us not to real cast a reall attack. In the past, North Koreans will release a missile and the atmosphere gets serious. We live as usual. Many foreigners, especially some native speaker in Korea are so worried and some them left Korea without resigning first. Some of my foreign friends called me and informed me that'll be quick. The foreign press reported the situation Korea was very serious but we, Koreans didn’t care about it. In the past, politicians in South Korea used North Korea to control our nation. The public became smart and we can't be fooled by the politicians anymore. When I was young, our people asked for unification but it was never easy. After unification, we have to sacrifice until the economy and society stabilize. South and North Korea have serious economic gaps. After unification in Germany had a lot of society and economic problems for many years. I want North Korea to change like China. They developed their economy even though they still remain as a communist country. We have to interchange in many ways to reunified.


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