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Korean are not trust in Chinese food. When I was in Korea, I heard some rumor about China. One of that is Chinese use growth hormones When they grow crops or raise animals. That’s why some people grow tall after live in China. I was scary to buy abnormal shape or size of vegetables and fruits in China. I also grow one centimeter after live in China. One Chinese friend told me be careful to eat in China before I go to China. She said China has that word that person who selling vegetables say don’t eat vegetables, person who selling fruits say don’t eat fruits and person who selling meats say don’t eat meats. That means there is no trustworthy food in China.
If I started to doubt it, everything was suspicious and I was not happy whatever I eat. So I tried to change my mind. I persuaded me that China is also a human-doing place. I tried to enjoy Chinese food and culture. I tried to focus on positive things in China. Every city in China has different tasty. So whenever I went to other city in China, I can eat different kind of tasty. The city I live in China has spicy and salty tasty. That’s why I felt burn around my lips at the first time in China. Many youth woman has red color around their lips because of spicy food. Spicy in China is different with Korea one. Korea spicy is getting hot. But Chinese food is really spicy at first mouth. I like to eat Malatang that is Chinese food. Mala is one kind of spicy herb. That is very addictive. So Malatang is very hot in Korea since last year. I want to try to eat different kind of food in different countries.

Korean are not doesn'ttrust in Chinese food. When I was in Korea, I heard some rumor about China. One of that is Chinese use growth hormones when they grow crops or raise animals. That’s why some people grow tall become tall after live in staying in China. I was scared to buy abnormal shape or size of vegetables and fruits in China. I also grow one centimeter after live in China. My height increased for around 1 cm. after staying in China. One Chinese friend told me be careful to eat in China before I go to China.went there. She said China has that word that person who selling vegetables say don’t eat vegetables, person who selling fruits say don’t eat fruits and person who selling meats say don’t eat meatsShe mentioned that vegetable vendors, fruit vendors, as well as, fruit vendors don't eat the product their selling in the market.That means there is no trustworthy food in China. Due to this reason, the food in the market can't be trusted.

If I started to doubt it, everything was suspicious and I was not happy with  whatever I eat. So I tried to change my mindset. I persuaded me myself that China is also a human-doing place.where humans live. I tried to enjoy Chinese food and culture. I tried to focus on positive things in China. Every city in China has different tasty cuisine. So wWhenever I went goto other city in China, I can eat different kind of tasty cuisine. The city where I where I used to live in China has spicy and salty taste. That’s why I felt burn around my lips at the first time in China. It felt like my lips are burning due to the spiciness of their food. Many youngerouth woman has red color pigment around their lips because of spicy food. Spicy food in China is different with Korea one. Korea spiciness is getting hot. But Chinese food is really spicy at first mouth at the first try. I like to eat Malatang, that is Chinese food. Mala is one kind of spicy herb. That is very addictive. So Malatang is very hot in Korea since last year. I want to try to eat different kind of food in different countries.

 

 

 

 


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