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Hi Melanie

today i am gonna wirte all that i had in my head
First of all, my major concern is how to improve english of couse
cuz i dont have enough free time in the weekday i usually concentrate on english study in the mornning
thankful for your help this day i get a way for improving english skill
another method i m looking for is making forigen friends in korea
i alrealdy had few penpal friends but we are live exactly different world and time so continusouse contacting is hard
i dont know if you have hard about that here in korea there is a city called 'Itaewon' where most of people who live in are forigners
so i will go there in a few day
Oh my, my plan is writting many things but it's time to work TT

Anyway allways thank you for teaching me
See you in tommorow

Hi Melanie

 

today i am gonna wirte all that i had in my head

Today, I am going to write all I have in my mind.

 

 

First of all, my major concern is how to improve english of couse

First of all, my major concern is how to improve my English skill, of course.

 

 

cuz i dont have enough free time in the weekday i usually concentrate on english study in the mornning

I don't have enough  time during weekdays, that's why I really concentrate whenever I'm having class in the morning.

 

 

thankful for your help this day i get a way for improving english skill

I'm very thankful of your help because you helped me find a way on how I can improve my English skill.

 

 

another method i m looking for is making forigen friends in korea

Another way I'm thinking is to make friends with foreigners who live here in Korea.

 

 

i alrealdy had few penpal friends but we are live exactly different world and time so continusouse contacting is hard

I already have few friends whom I chat with, but we live in totally different place and time so it's hard for us to contact each other continuously.

 

 

i dont know if you have hard about that here in korea there is a city called 'Itaewon' where most of people who live in are forigners

I don't know if you've heard about it, but here in Korea there's a city called "Itaewon", where most of the people living there are foreigners.

 

 

so i will go there in a few day

So, I'm planning to go there in a few days from now.

 

 

Oh my, my plan is writting many things but it's time to work TT

Oh! My plan is to write a lot but it's time for me to work now.

 

 

Anyway allways thank you for teaching me

Anyway, I'd like to thank you for teaching me.

 

 

See you in tommorow

 

See you tomorrow!


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