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Once, when he was record on TV show, a comedian said that Hong's looking was a little bit different with us. and he asked Hong whether he like a man. Hong answered immediately "Yes" but broadcast recording was ceased and he failed to come out as gay.
Afterward, he gather reporters and journalists to reveal his homosexuality. After that the network fired him from his prime-time variety show. after three years finally he could appear on TV drama as a role of homosexual. then Hong has being strived for gay rights. he has two sister. After his first elder sister's divorce he adopted her children and changed their last names to his.

Today common people's awareness is being changed by him. certainly Hong is affecting Korean culture. He also live hard as actor, restaurateur, and adjunct professor of department of media studies. He say "we have to trier than other people so that they may not be discriminated. Some people said there are B(Birth) and D(Death) in life and there is C(choice) between B to D. People have right to choose their life." obviously he chose his life.

Hong is the most prominent openly gay celebrity in Korea. I respect his choice.
Now, We call him Top Gay.

One time, when he was recording for a TV show, a comedian said that Hong's physical appearance is a little bit different with most of the people, then he asked him if he's attracted to man. Hong immediately answered the question by Yes! However, the recording ceased and failed to come out that he's a gay.

Afterwards, he gathered some reporters and journalists to reveal his homosexuality. After that the network fired him from his prime-time variety show. Then, after three years, he finally got a role as a bisexual. He strived to get his rights as a gay. He has two sisters. After his elder sister got divorced, he adopted her children and changed their surname to his.

Today, most of the people's awareness about sexuality have changed because of his story. Hong is certainly affecting Korean's culture. He also lives hard as an actor, restaurateur, and adjunct professor for Media Studies. He has a quotation "we have to trier than other people so that they may not be discriminated. Some people said there are B(Birth) and D(Death) in life and there is C(choice) between B to D. People have right to choose their life." Obviously he chose his life.

Hong is the most prominent Gay celebrity in Korea. I respect his choice.

Now, we call him the Top Gay.


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