I learned to dive, and kicked my feet.
I felt it was good exercise and it was fun.
When I learned freestyle first time, I swallowed some water.
Now, I can do backstroke, and breaststroke.
Swallow water is bad, but play in the water is fun.
I'm a happy human.
When I learned how to swim for the first time, I was looking forward to it. I learned how to dive and kick my feet. I thought it was a good exercise and it was fun at the same time. When I started to learn freestyle swimming, I swallowed some water. Now, I can do backstroke and breaststroke. It feels bad when I swallow water, but playing in the water is fun. I'm a happy human.
Hi, Min!
I'm glad to hear your experiences in learning how to swim, You did a great job narrating your personal experience and you use the right verb tense, which simple past tense, however the words in your sentences are not well organized. Kindly check the corrections I made on your composition.
Keep on improving your writing skill!
Kath :)
