My favorite singer

1.My favorite singer is Twice.

2.Because Twice is pretty.

3.And sing well.

4.My favorite song is Yes or Yes.

5.The title of this song is originally Englih.

6.This song is exciting.

7. I love Twice!

 

              My favorite South Korean girl group is Twice because they are pretty and they sing well. My favorite song is Yes or Yes, the title of this song is originally in English. It is an exciting song. I love Twice!

 

Hello, Lucy! 

             You can write quite well, however I want you start putting your sentences in paragraph form instead of putting them in numbers. There are some sentences that you can combine in one sentence, so I want you to check the corrections that I made on your composition. Keep on practicing your writing skills! You can do it!

 

Kath :)