"Okay, we really need to hurry now Lisa! In five hours will be your birthday and if we don't arrive to the venue on that time, we will get stuck here forever!" They rushed to the 2nd dimension to say "thank you" quickly to Rosie then rushed back to 1st dimension. They finished their mission and got home safe. "Thank you Lana for making my dream come true!" "No problem! Now, do you want to eat dinner?" "Yesssss! I am straving!" The sisters lived happily ever after an came to visit Lisa and Rosie very often. They even had the chance to know the other BLACKPINK members. They were really happy upon seeing the news saying BLACKPINK Lisa has made a new record on billboard. Everyone had their dream come true and that was the most important thing for them.
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Jin06
2020.08.03
“Okay, we really need to rush now Lisa! In 5 hours it’s ur birthday and if we don’t get back by that time we will be stuck here forever!” They rushed to the 2nd dimension to say a quick thank you to Rosie and then rushed to 1st dimension. They got home safe and finished their mission. “Thank you Lana for making my dream come true!” “No problem, now do you want to eat dinner?!” “Yesssss I am starving!” The sisters lived happily ever after and went to visit Lisa and Rosie often, they even got to know the other BLACKPINK members. They were really happy when they saw a news that said BLACKPINK Lisa made a new record on billboard. Everyone had their dream come true and that was the most important thing for them.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 5회 30분 8주
교재
side by side 1 (Junior course)
번호
제목
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1996
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[10번째 영작 첨삭]
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Therese"☎
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1995
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[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Manny
Therese"☎
2021.05.05
1994
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[17번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
Mary
2021.05.04
1993
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[13번째 영작 첨삭]
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Melissa
2021.05.04
1992
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[24번째 영작 첨삭]
My friends
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2021.05.03
1991
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
The family meal is important
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2021.05.03
1990
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
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2021.05.03
1989
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭]
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2021.05.02
1988
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
Should we aware events that occur in other countries?
Melissa
2021.05.02
1987
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
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Melissa
2021.05.02
1986
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Start right away or wait until we get the good idea?
Melissa
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1985
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
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Melissa
2021.05.01
1984
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[23번째 영작 첨삭]
Why like Coco the movie
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2021.04.30
1983
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[22번째 영작 첨삭]
About my homework.
Mary
2021.04.30
1982
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
The majority of business owners are driven solely by the pursuit of wealth- (disagree)
Melissa
2021.04.30
1981
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
My friend interview
-
2021.04.28
1980
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
The elderly need exercise more than young people do.
Melissa
2021.04.28
1979
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
Think about a beautiful place that you have visited before.
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2021.04.27
1978
완료
[38번째 영작 첨삭]
Fuzzle
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2021.04.27
1977
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[37번째 영작 첨삭]
Quiz Battle
-
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