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Time is so fast. I don't know how the day passed. Today I woke up early. And I played with eng mu the parrot raised since high school. Four years ago, My brother brought eng mu to the place where he worked part time. The eng mu was displayed on the cage with its wings cut off. So eng mu afraid of people. However, eng mu is much better than before. It is really glad. Anyway.. When I was playing with a eng mu the morning passed. And I had a lunch. lunch menu was Kimchi Fried Rice. It is easy to make. I made it. And I checked my schedule at 2pm. But the schedule was wrong. The lecture I wanted to study was canceled. So suddenly I had to plan again from scratch. I decided to go to the same place with my friend for Training. I was really upset. I called the professor to explain my situation. And changed the Training date. After all the work was done, much time had passed,, Nothing goes as planned.. Maybe it's good that you don't have a plan.....what the..*
I had a quarrel with my sister. The world is bitter. The reason for the argument is simple. A difference of opinion about boyfriend. A family is the closest, but sometimes it hurts the most. Because my family knows me best. And when family talk with another family, you are not as careful as you are with other people...Family is important people to me so I should do better, but it is not easy. I don't want to lose the argument. Why do I do that. Will I be okay when I get a little older..?
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Thank you for reading
I hope you'll be happy today. Teacher Chloe

Dear diary
Time is so fast. I don't know how the day passed. Today I woke up early. And I played with eng mu the parrot raised since high school. Four years ago, My brother brought eng mu to the place where he worked part time. The eng mu was displayed on the cage with its wings cut off. So eng mu afraid of people. However, eng mu is much better than before. It is really glad. Anyway.. When I was playing with a eng mu the morning passed. And I had a lunch. lunch menu was Kimchi Fried Rice. It is easy to make. I made it. And I checked my schedule at 2pm. But the schedule was wrong. The lecture I wanted to study was canceled. So suddenly I had to plan again from scratch. I decided to go to the same place with my friend for Training. I was really upset. I called the professor to explain my situation. And changed the Training date. After all the work was done, much time had passed,, Nothing goes as planned.. Maybe it's good that you don't have a plan.....what the..*
I had a quarrel with my sister. The world is bitter. The reason for the argument is simple. A difference of opinion about boyfriend. A family is the closest, but sometimes it hurts the most. Because my family knows me best. And when family talk with another family, you are not as careful as you are with other people...Family is important people to me so I should do better, but it is not easy. I don't want to lose the argument. Why do I do that. Will I be okay when I get a little older..?
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Thank you for reading
I hope you'll be happy today. Teacher Chloe

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Dear diary

Time is so fast. I don't know how the day passed. Today I woke up early and I played with eng mu the parrot I raised since high school. Four years ago, My brother brought eng mu to our house from the place where he worked part-time. Eng mu was displayed on the cage with its wings cut off. So eng mu was afraid of people. However, eng mu is much better than before. I was really glad. Anyway, When I was playing with eng mu the morning passed and I had lunch. The lunch menu was Kimchi Fried Rice. It is easy to make. I made it and I checked my schedule at 2 pm. But the schedule was wrong. The lecture I wanted to study was canceled. So suddenly I had to plan again from scratch. I decided to go to the same place as my friend for Training. I was really upset. I called the professor to explain my situation and changed the training date. After all the work was done, much time had passed,, Nothing goes as planned.. Maybe it's good that you don't have a plan.....what the..*

I quarreled with my sister. The world is bitter. The reason for the argument is simple. A difference of opinion about the boyfriend. A family is the closest, but sometimes it hurts the most. Because my family knows me best. And when the family talks with another family, you are not as careful as you are with other people...Family is important people to me so I should do better, but it is not easy. I don't want to lose the argument. Why do I do that? Will I be okay when I get a little older..? 

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Thank you for reading 

I hope you'll be happy today. Teacher Chloe

 

Hello Jinah,

We think that life is sometimes unfair, but whatever circumstances you're experiencing right now is only a test on how you  handle each situation you have. 

Beleive in your self and have confidence! Mistakes are the best teacher in life.


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